14/01/16 review of the concepts shown

Review on scenes shown 

The tube

I really liked the concept of the tube as it added character to the piece 

They weren't all bobbing in the same way and it looked not like a tube 

I thought the scene fit with the concepts 

The pub

The pub fit well in the scene 

I enjoyed the characterisation

I think the forest may be difficult and it will be hard to perform in the small space as it can be hard to understand  

French tube bombing 

I think the French didn't work too well but I enjoyed the fact you brought it to a modern day situation 

The train made the scene restricted

The hospital

I didn't understand how the scene fit into the  concept and I didn't understand the scene 

I felt it needed work but could be legible if you made some slight changes such as having an abused woman in the hospital telling her husband she still loves him